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Redundancy, comparison, connectors and idioms

Four smaller error types: saying the same thing twice, comparing the wrong way, joining clauses with the wrong linker or none, and changing a fixed expression.

Why this matters

Each of these comes up in CDS spotting-errors and sentence-improvement items from 2017 to 2026, a few at a time. They are easy marks once you know the patterns, because each one has a short test: cross out the extra word, count the things compared, look for the linker, and check the idiom word for word.

Concept 1 of 4: Saying it twice: redundant words and double negatives

Some words already carry a meaning inside them. 'Return' already means 'come back', so 'return back' says 'back' twice. Saying the same thing twice is called redundancy (or pleonasm). A double negative is the same fault with 'not': 'unless' already means 'if not', so 'unless he does not' says 'not' twice.

Definition

The cross-out test: cross out the word you suspect. If the meaning does not change, the word was redundant. Common redundant pairs:

  • return back, revert back, repeat again, cooperate together, circle around, circumnavigate around.
  • the reason is because (write 'the reason is that'); the most cleverest (write 'the cleverest').
  • that before a wh-word in a reported question: 'He asked who was absent', not 'asked that who'.
  • An extra word inside a proverb: 'Where there is a will, there is a way', with no 'then'.

Double negatives: these words are already negative and take no second 'not' or 'no':

  • unless (= if not), hardly, scarcely, barely, seldom, neither, nor, nobody, nothing.
  • 'Unless you hurry', 'There is hardly any water', 'I can hardly hear you'.

Worked example

Find the part with the error. (a) The teacher asked him (b) to repeat the answer again (c) because nobody had heard it. (d) No error
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CDS · 2024 · CDS (II) 2024 — English · Q112Moderate

Example 1 · Spotting Errors · Redundancy, Comparison, Connectors and Idioms

Directions: improve/correct the underlined word
The visiting school children circumnavigated around the Dal Lake with visible delight during their visit to Srinagar.

Look inside the verb

Many redundant phrases hide the extra meaning inside the verb's own prefix: return = come back, cooperate = work together, circumnavigate = travel around. Adding 'back', 'together' or 'around' repeats the prefix.

'Unless' is already negative

'He will be suspended unless he reports' is correct. 'Unless he does not report' means the opposite of what is meant. When you see 'unless', check that no 'not' follows it.

'That' with a reported question

'That' introduces a reported statement: 'He said that he was tired.' A reported question starts with its own wh-word or 'whether', so 'asked that who' has one linker too many.

A proverb is quoted exactly

A proverb is a fixed form. 'Where there is a will, there is a way' has no 'then', and 'All that glitters is not gold' has no 'which'. One added word is an error.

Concept 2 of 4: Comparison: twice as much as, fewer, absolute adjectives

A comparison has fixed shapes. A multiple uses 'as ... as': twice as much as. Things you can count take fewer; amounts you cannot count take less. And some adjectives, like 'favourite' or 'unique', are already the top of their scale, so 'most' cannot go before them.

Definition

Multiples (twice, three times, half):

  • multiple + as + adjective + as: 'twice as much as', 'three times as long as', 'half as big as'. Not 'twice more than'.

Countable vs uncountable:

  • A countable noun has a plural (people, books, days): fewer, many, number of.
  • An uncountable noun has no plural (water, money, time): less, much, amount of.
  • A sum of money, a distance or a time taken as one amount uses 'less': 'less than twenty rupees', 'less than five kilometres'.

Absolute adjectives cannot be graded: favourite, unique, perfect, complete, ideal, supreme, round, square. No 'more' or 'most' before them. Two of a kind: with exactly two things, use the comparative (taller, better), not the superlative. 'Than any' needs 'other' when the thing is in the same group: 'bigger than any other city in India'.

Worked example

Find the part with the error. (a) Everyone agreed that (b) her plan was the most ideal (c) solution to the problem. (d) No error
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CDS · 2025 · CDS (II) 2025 — English · Q16Moderate

Example 2 · Spotting Errors · Redundancy, Comparison, Connectors and Idioms

Directions: Each item in this section has a sentence with three underlined parts labelled (a), (b) and (c). Read each sentence to determine whether there is an error in any underlined part and indicate your response on the answer sheet against the above-mentioned corresponding letter. If there is no error, indicate your response as (d).
The officer marvelled at the low attendance remarking on the presence of less than twenty people at work.

Less with money, fewer with people

'Fewer than twenty people' counts people. 'Less than twenty rupees' treats the money as one amount. Ask: am I counting separate things, or measuring an amount?

'Most favourite' sounds natural, but is wrong

'Favourite' already means 'liked most'. Write 'my favourite book', never 'my most favourite book'. The same holds for 'most unique', 'more perfect' and 'most ideal'.

'Twice more than'

The paper treats 'twice more than' as an error. The safe pattern is always a multiple followed by as ... as.

Concept 3 of 4: Joining clauses: conjunctions, pairs and punctuation

A clause is a group of words with its own subject and verb. Two clauses need a joining word, a conjunction (and, but, so, because), between them. A comma alone cannot do the job. Some joining words come in fixed pairs, and the paper often breaks the pair.

Definition

Joining two clauses:

  • Two full clauses joined by only a comma make a comma splice, an error. Add a conjunction, or use a full stop.
  • Two verbs that share one subject still need 'and': 'Feminism grew out of these movements and reached maturity ...'.
  • An order followed by its result takes and (or or for a warning): 'Work hard and you will pass'; 'Hurry, or you will miss the bus'.

Fixed pairs (correlatives):

  • between ... and, both ... and, either ... or, neither ... nor, not only ... but also, no sooner ... than, hardly ... when.
  • although / though take no 'but' in the second clause ('though ... yet' is allowed).

Pick the linker by meaning: 'and' adds, 'but' and 'yet' contrast, 'so' gives a result. A linker that signals the wrong relation is an error. The apostrophe shows possession (the visitor's ticket), never a plain plural (the visitors).

Worked example

Find the part with the error. (a) The rain stopped at noon, (b) the match began (c) half an hour later. (d) No error
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CDS · 2026 · CDS (II) 2026 — English · Q50Hard

Example 3 · Spotting Errors · Redundancy, Comparison, Connectors and Idioms

Directions: Each item in this section has a sentence with three underlined parts labelled (a), (b) and (c). Read each sentence to determine whether there is an error in any underlined part and indicate your response on the answer sheet against the above-mentioned corresponding letter. If there is no error, indicate your response as (d).
Walk down our street any day you will see children playing.

A comma cannot join two sentences

If you could put a full stop at the comma and both halves would stand as sentences, the comma alone is an error. The fault belongs to the part where the second clause begins, because that is where the missing 'and', 'but' or 'so' should go.

Between ... to

'Between 10 a.m. to 2 p.m.' mixes two pairs. Write 'between 10 a.m. and 2 p.m.' or 'from 10 a.m. to 2 p.m.'.

A linker with the wrong meaning

'Yet' and 'but' announce a contrast. In 'They mix with their own community and none other', the second part adds to the first; it does not contrast with it. 'Yet none other' is wrong.

An apostrophe is not a plural

'The visitor's to the zoo' should be 'the visitors'. Use an apostrophe only to show that something belongs to someone: 'the visitors' tickets'.

Concept 4 of 4: Fixed expressions that cannot be changed

A fixed expression is a group of words that native speakers always use in one form: 'day and night', 'far from done', 'if not impossible'. Change one word, add a plural or drop a small word, and the expression breaks, even though the meaning may still come through.

Definition

How the paper breaks a fixed expression:

  • It changes the number: 'days and nights' for 'day and night'.
  • It drops a word: 'from done' for 'far from done', 'break in hives' for 'break out in hives'.
  • It swaps a word: 'in case impossible' for 'if not impossible', 'today night' for 'tonight'.
  • It changes the word order: 'no trouble is there' for 'there is no trouble'.

Check each expression word for word against the form you know.

ExpressionMeaningWrong form in the paperSitting
there is no trouble'there is' + noun says that something existsno trouble is there2017 (I)
if not impossibleperhaps even impossiblein case impossible2017 (II)Q
day and nightall the time, without stoppingdays and nights2018 (I)Q
tonightthis nighttoday night2018 (II)Q
come out (in support)openly show supportcoming in2019 (I)
far from donenot nearly finishedfrom done2023 (II)Q
break out in hivessuddenly develop an itchy rashbreak in hives2024 (II)
The same family: 'last night' and 'yesterday evening', never 'yesterday night'.
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CDS · 2023 · CDS (II) 2023 — English · Q43Moderate

Example 4 · Spotting Errors · Redundancy, Comparison, Connectors and Idioms

Directions: find error in three underlined parts or No error
However, the task is from done, particularly in ensuring equity in the distribution of quality education.

A fixed expression keeps its number

'Day and night', 'in no time', 'at all costs'. Making the singular plural, or the plural singular, breaks the expression.

One small word missing

'The task is from done' and 'I break in hives' each lost one small word. When a phrase sounds slightly off, ask what word is missing before you decide it is fine.

Today night, yesterday night

English says tonight, last night, this morning, yesterday evening. 'Today night' and 'yesterday night' are errors.

'There is' comes first

To say that something exists, start with 'there is' or 'there are': 'there is no trouble', 'there are many reasons'. 'No trouble is there' is a word-for-word translation, not English.

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Fixed expressions that cannot be changed7 rows
ExpressionMeaningWrong form in the paperSitting
there is no trouble'there is' + noun says that something existsno trouble is there2017 (I)
if not impossibleperhaps even impossiblein case impossible2017 (II)Q
day and nightall the time, without stoppingdays and nights2018 (I)Q
tonightthis nighttoday night2018 (II)Q
come out (in support)openly show supportcoming in2019 (I)
far from donenot nearly finishedfrom done2023 (II)Q
break out in hivessuddenly develop an itchy rashbreak in hives2024 (II)
The same family: 'last night' and 'yesterday evening', never 'yesterday night'.

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